Tuesday, January 29, 2019
A good day turned bad – creative writing
Swimming was al panaches an exciting sport for me, it made me tonus alive and athletic. However, this finest sport became a mark that would be on me for the repose of my life.Burbury Park was the place, me and my friends decided to go greens because t here was a football game tournament that we had all been postponement for, this was our chance, a chance to pass to the final. The die hard was absolutely smashing, it couldnt get better. The sun beat down on us and we couldnt have felt a much positive vibe. The birds were singing and the trees move to the calm wind that was keeping us cool.We were getting ready, doing our potent ups and having a squad talk on how we be best aggroup. The match had bypast underway, after a nervy few minutes, the score was level, nine-nine and the atmosphere had already set in the situation was that the next team to score would say into the finals of the Birmingham cup. I dived towards the ball to make a critical save which kept us in a do minant position at that placeafter my team had capitalized on what I had done for them. I shouted COME ON LADS Pass and move and little did I know, they were doing what I had asked of them. I had to be harsh this result improve them, Hey Markus What the hell do you think youre doing, shooter from that range, do you think youre Ronaldo? we were under vast amount of pressure, and the supporters made us know it with their screaming and supportive shouting, knowing that the next goal will be the decider.Markus was by further one of the best players in my team and I knew no-one at the age of fifteen could shoot that far out. The foe were closing in towards our half of the pitch, and I was be orgasm more and more anxious with every second that passed by. I had a quick gleam towards the clock and to my horror, there was only sixty seconds left, and as the role of captain, I had a duty, and that was to control my team and motivate them to win. I knew that the lads would not break ext ra time as the looks on their faces told me they were exhausted and weary.To my surprise I had not sorbetd Aquil (the weakest player in our squad) running towards the box, and then I had keyn an opportunity. At that point, Abbas had possession of the ball. I knew that this mayhap the last chance, we had to take advantage and maybe nevertheless score.Abbas successfully crossed the ball to Aquil, he had in conclusion hear my com humannessds which resulted in the fine cross. The cross was neatly passed to Aquil, it had looked like he was unquestionably issue to score the winner. All the supports were chanting his name, in hope that he was going to score, it was one on one with the keeper, but unfortunately he had slipped. A depressed moan came from our supporters. However out of nowhere, Hussein been waiting for the rebound and had smashed the ball in the bottom of the net. I surd a huge sigh of relief and the crowds chanted our names, I finally knew what it is like to be a prof essional football player.We were all degenerate after that fantastic win allowing us to celebrate like packs of absurd animals. I owed it to all my players for all their hard work. Going to the finals of the Birmingham cup was the greatest feat ever in our livesKnackered was not even the word to describe how tired we were. Sweat was running down our faces onto the cold floor as though it were a waterfall. Tired, half of our team had decided to go back to their warm homes for a cup of tea and a bath, while the rest of us decided to go swimming at our local swimming centre, in Newtown.Me, Aquil, Abbas and Hussein were walking towards the swimming centre. We were all feeling excited virtually our upcoming match against Aston Villa Youth team in the final. We had just overcome West Bromwich Youth team making us better than them. I had decided that I was going to treat the lads for their hard work after swimming. Me, more than anyone else wanted to step inside the swimming pool and sedately cool down and rest.We were on the way to the swimming pool, we were on the important road and Newtown Swimming Centre could be seen not also far in the distance. On the way towards the Swimming Centre we had seen a park leading us straight to the Swimming Centre.Cmon lets take the left and go through the park, it looks much easier. I state, not knowing what was going to pass next.We had been through the park, Yellow Park, many times before and we had thought it would be the safest and quickest way. We walked pass the main play area and it had seemed empty. Swings left baseball swing by the wind, and slides left for children to play on. I started to feel agitated and began thinking to myself why there wasnt anyone around. Goosebumps started appearing on my skin as an ice cold shiver rattled through my spine. But there was no turning back now as we had already walked past just about of the park. We were at the end of the park and it was just one dark coarse alleyway. I began wondering even more and started thinking to myself about how lessened this area had recently become. Newtown is not how it used to be back in the twenty-four hour periods but is becoming more and more violent and even more crimes are occurring by the minute. We were halfway down the alleyway and I could smell freedom just around fifty yards away.Oi Come here now a cold deep voice shouted at us from down the alley. I automatically looked up and to my horror and I saw two dark men. Both were hiding their identity with masks and caps, we knew they were criminals. I felt nervous and scared, thoughts began running through my mind as I thought of an escape plan. Who are these large number and what do they want? What are they going to do to us? Why are they calling us? I was able to identify their ethnicity and they were both black. From then on I knew something bad was going to occur. Aquil was standing next to me. On the other mass as I turned around I was shocked to see the r est of my mates making a run for it.All these signs meant that these people were not good and I knew that the next few minutes were going to be some of the worst in my life. I didnt clock on, I was never in this situation before. Froze by fear, I stood still as I saw the men walk towards us,Yo, what ends you from? they said, not bothering to wait for an answer. I knew if I hadnt responded fast, I wouldnt make it out uninjured. I answered Lozells.There was no reply from these men as they looked down on us. I began to get anxious. I knew that I had a huge sum of money in my wallet and thoughts began creeping into my mind, as I saw the second man reach into his pocket, that these people wanted our money. The first of the two men had started coming closer and closer and as he approached us, he put his build up around the both of us. From that moment my suspicion had been answered because he had said the avocation words to me.I need some money manI kept quite. The other black man that was with him had taken my friend, Aquil into a landmark of the alley in which I couldnt communicate to him.I had to say something to the soulfulness who was talking to me otherwise I would have to face the consequences. I was in a dilemma. I said without thinking I have phoebe bird pounds. Of course I was lying.Good, good, now hand over the flipping money or I will knock the hell out of you. he said with a harsh tone as he raised a fist to my face, he was swearing too. I was thinking of a way to take out my money without him realising that I had more. Too my stupidity, I took too recollective and the man had thrown a strong penetrate at me on my chin.ARGH I shouted in pain as I fell to the floor on my knees. Aquil quickly looked over but genuinely couldnt help me because he was getting robbed by the other mugger.Another punch fell my way but this time on the back of my head, I swore in pain and anger. I looked up and saw that I had no choice but to hand over all my money a hug e sum of money. It was sixty pounds. The mugger helped himself and searched me and ran off with my wallet. So did the other mugger.I felt weak. I felt helpless. I was injured. I was bleeding from my address and from the back of my head. It had also looked like the other mugger had finished with Aquil. Me and Aquil laid there for a couple of minutes before a couple of members of the public helped us up.I was shaking as I walked back towards my home. I met up with my friends, and they were in shock, they were wondering what they could have done to help me and Aquil. I had told my parents everything that had occurred and of course my parents had phoned the police. It was useless and there was no point as the muggers were long goneI just thought to myself how a superb day just became worse.
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